Thứ Sáu, 4 tháng 7, 2008

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Topic: Some businesses now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoke in all public places. Do you agree or disargree?

“To smoke or not to smoke”, to some people this really a huge question. Smoking cigarettes is prohibited in public places in many countries, even in some companies. There are people who absolutely support this policy because smoking can cause lung cancer to direct smoker as well as indirect smokers while some others think smoking can help them work more effective.

People who support smoking interdiction may have many strong and persuasive reasons. First of all, smoking cigarettes may cause lung cancer and other ENT (ear, nose, and throat) problem. This information about cancer can be seen in the cover of most of cigarette box but smokers seem to ignore it. The smoke and nicotine that are contained in the cigar can be very harmful to smoker’s health. Moreover, as the matter of fact, it is so much more dangerous for people around them, the indirect smokers. Those unlucky people who do not smoke, actually, because they know “cigarette kills” but they can not help to be indirect smokers when they go to public places like the cinemas, subways, bus stations or restaurants. Last but not least, nicotine can lead to addiction for those who use it. That’s the reason why people know about the danger but they simply can not give it up.

On the other hand, opponents may argue that smokers always feel unwell if they try to quit smoking. They point out that keeping themselves away from cigarettes means bringing them higher blood pressure than usual. According to them, a light of a cigar help them to stay awake, work much more efficiently, and even be a pain killer. Another point is that people, especially young people find themselves more stylish with a cigarette on their lips. The appearance of cigarette image on the screen accompanied with handsome actors and romantic sense cause a trend in the youth who make an effort to imitate their idols.

To sum up, smoking is still a considerably matter of the world that must be banned in the public places since it can adverse all of us, the smokers and people around them, simultaneously despite of what smokers raised to protect their opinions. I reckon that if people awareness and good behavior could be improved and the government made more efforts such as raising tax, cigarette advertisement prohibition and “no smoking in public spots”, this serious problem would be more effectively reduced.

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1. “To smoke or not to smoke”, to some people this really a huge question.
-> Wrong grammar, missing TO BE

2. "smoking can cause lung cancer to direct smoker as well as indirect smokers while some others think smoking can help them work more effective."
-> not good for health, even cause lung, throat cancers...

3. "may cause lung cancer and other ENT (ear, nose, and throat) problem"
-> using "may" make it a weak statement though

4. "Those unlucky people who do not smoke, actually, because they know “cigarette kills” but they can not help to be indirect smokers when they go to public places like the cinemas, subways, bus stations or restaurants."
-> Watch your grammar, where is the VERB?

5. "To sum up, smoking is still a considerably matter of the world that must be banned in the public places since it can adverse all of us, the smokers and people around them, simultaneously (?) despite of what smokers raised to protect their opinions."
-> avoid such sophisticated sentence

6. "I reckon that if people awareness and good behavior could be improved and the government made more efforts such as raising tax, cigarette advertisement prohibition and “no smoking in public spots”, this serious problem would be more effectively reduced."
->
"I reckon that if the government made more efforts such as raising tax, cigarette advertisement prohibition or “no smoking in public spots”, and more importantly, people improved their awareness and behaviors a lot better, this serious problem would be solved more effectively"